In order to get top grades in this essay, there must be a clear structure to it. This would consist of an introduction which should include three of the following: 1) it must start with a brief sentence introducing the topic of the essay (i.e. what is the purpose of holidays?) 2) it must define key words when necessary ('se relaxer' could be defined in this case) 3) it must set out the structure of the essay.The main body of the essay must consist of a balanced argument. It must give reasons supporting both sides of the argument and each point must be backed up by a coherent example. For extra marks, you should invoke counter-arguments and suggest why they are wrong.The conclusion should merely respond to the question and briefly summarise the points that you have mentioned in your essay.