The aim of an introduction is to clearly state your answer to the question and then explain your argument. A strong candidate will answer the question in the first sentence. Then proceed by outlining how the argument will be set out in the body of the essay. A strong candidate can add/ make a comment about the question asked. For example, to answer the question: ‘How significant was the pursuit of wealth for Britain’s involvement in Africa in the years 1857 to c1890?’ A strong candidate will state their answer to this question in the first sentence of the introduction. Ie ‘ The pursuit of wealth for Britain’s involvement in Africa in the years 1857-1890 was high significant evident in the measures taken by British to protect lucrative trade and worth of the Suez Canal.’ Then go on to list the factors that will be argued.A strong candidate might also comment on the question. For example a remark can be made that ‘To assess the pursuit of wealth alone without the accompanying consideration of power is too simplistic. British engagement was a complex process and that different motives provided imperatives at different times and in different regions.’ Etc.