There is no set answer for this question which may appear on a writing paper. In an answer for this question I would look for the use of: a variety of tenses (for the higher grades I would look for at least 3 tenses)use of adjectives which are agreed to the noun conjunction phrases to create longer sentences - such as, because, however etc. a wide range of vocabulary to describe friends and familyopinion phrases I would mark spelling and grammar.