In order to write a good paragraph for an essay you should use the PEACE paragraph. This is writing the point you want to make to answer the question and explaining the point made then further using examples to analyse the point made. It is also important to add criticisms and show the ability to evaluate the answer given. As long as you follow these steps you are on the right track before moving to the next level which is exam skills. This will put you in a much higher band which i can demonstrate to you. Remember that the PEACE does not have to be in order.