How can I boost my essay mark?
An easy way to this is by adding connectives to your work which will make you expand upon your ideas. For example, the use of 'por lo tanto-therefore and 'además- also', these terms will make your essay flow better and help you to develop your points. Additionally, learning different ways to introduce opinions other than 'pienso que- I think that' will allow your work to be more sophisticated.
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