Most importantly, that you showcase your personality and transfer this to paper. They want to see that you are well-rounded person and not just academic. This is because Medicine isn't just about 5/6 years of learning and then you're a doctor. It's about a life long journey of learning and balancing things you enjoy. They want to see that you've made a conscious effort to give something back to the community, and that you are an empathetic person, someone who is relateable, who has a passion to help the community and not do medicine in the name of prestige. Write something different, maybe a rhetorical question, not just "I am a hard working person, and I like to help people." Why do you want to help people??
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